Daft Vader UK

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Hey! havent spoken to you in a long time sry for taking my time reviewing. you edited it realy well and i felt the novel taking a step up a ...

:D :D First post lol... I really like how you changed most of the stuff about it, and thanks for taking in my comment and putting it in more. Everything ...

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Cool thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Now I'm Extra determined to get round to posting ch2. Thanks Again

Mmmm cheesy sandwhich ... I like the way toji is explaining everything on the rooftops, its seems like you thought the storyline though alot. But another thing your taking us ...

Thanks I've just corrected it :D Really nice long reveiw thanks for taking the time... I'm away for the weekend so i'll post ch 2 then and try and break ...

:D My favourites are Call of Duty 4, Halo3 ,Battlefield badcompany, Rainbow six Vegas2 I've got a few others which aren't so good. What about you do you have an ...

+ Please read my first chapter of my new action/sci-fi. To see what you think

:D I have a cat called olive whos really friendly, i read a mix of stuff, Really I read anything that looks like it has an interesting blurb and an ...

Thanks :D I get annoyed as well because America seems to have all the fun with aliens... The book mainly will be set in Europe but some bits will be ...

Its sad how alex died :( . Only a few silly mistakes like the person said before me. Anyway nice idea for coming up with different realms, I think its ...

Chapter1 Nowhere to run Date Winter, 2022 AD Location River Dnieper, Ukraine POV: Captain J.W Price Year 2022 AD, the war for mankinds struggle for survival has reached its peak, ...

I think tis is pretty cool... i think the detail was a little over the top but still OK. Maybe you could tell why he was shooting the thing? I ...

Is this how to reveiw a story?? Anyway this is pretty good for your first time for writing... I think you should of been a bit more surprised when Rena ...